Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems?
In recent decades, economic inequality has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although it has many serious consequences, they are not without solutions.
There are a number of problems caused by wealth inequality. If the gap continues for a long time, class distinctions will be formed. For example, in developing countries, there are many restaurants that are open only for the elite and the poor are not allowed to enter because the owners are afraid that the beauty of the landscape will be deteriorated by poverty. Beside that, the wealthy will both hold political power and they have the right to take the lands,money,... of the poor. While the vagrant makes efforts to have achievements, affluent people can buy degrees and leadership with just money.
On the other hand, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, to address class discrimination, we should educate everyone about equal rights. For example, bringing lessons about equality in every lesson for students is a reasonable choice. Last but not least, in order for the rich not to get hold of the leadership, the government must be responsible to encourage the poor and bring into existence conditions for them. Making opportunities for the behind the eight ball person not only comforts them to stay motivated but also narrows the gap between wealth and poverty.
In conclusion, while wealth inequality can cause a great number of issues, there are many helpful solutions. It is predicted that more and more countries will be forced to take such measures to avoid the problem that has been raised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , money
...nd they have the right to take the lands,money,... of the poor. While the vagrant make...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n wealth and poverty. In conclusion, while wealth inequality can cause a grea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12734082397 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77201635672 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9130800047 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165489250181 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571839870487 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522255502871 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847913370574 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483050550975 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.