In many places, rapid lifestyle changes can affect family relationship. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is widely believed that familial bond can be affected by fast alteration of trends and practices in life. Although, there are consequences that may arise, it still has a positive impact on the family. This essay will discuss how the benefits of the developing life customs overshadows its detriments to family relationships.
On the one hand, usage of technology as one of the lifestyle shift of the society entails a negative effect on the family. It sometimes acts as a barrier in order for a family to interact personally. For example, it is common nowadays to see families dine together while holding gadgets in their hands, unknowingly compromising the essence of table etiquette and communication. As a result, parents become unaware of children's psychological and social standpoint which jeopardize familial ties.
On the other hand, family tours and movie dates are ways of living that vitalize kindred's connections. At present, international and domestic tours have become popular and by this, families encounter different cultures and experience real life adventures that strengthens their attachment to each other. Also, watching TV shows and movies at home as a family provides guidance and promotes proper values and behavior in facing challenges and realities of life. For this reason, each family member feel a sense of belonging, thereby sustaining the bond of the family.
To sum up, the speedy transformation of the way of living of the community remarkably influence family rapport. I believe that the edges of these lifestyle changes outstrip its negative effect on the relationship of a family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, then, while, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31007751938 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.989696466 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1276891283 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153426355371 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525028128472 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397630715583 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945770653673 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275533752996 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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