Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
In this modern era despite technological advancement, many students have to leave their home and have to go to other cities for pursuing higher education in different alma mater. There are both benefits and drawbacks of this development which will be discussed further in different paragraphs.
As far as the positive outcomes are concerned, one of which is that when they leave their home for educational purposes, they might gain a sense of independence and freedom such as they with their own pocket-money might spend in different leisure activity freely. They may able to join different health and social clubs and go there whenever they want, at what time they want. By living in the hostel, they are able to make friends with different people and by socializing with different people, they might gain deep insight at life and things as well. They will have a broad vision if they would master the art of communication. Therefore, life apart from home is necessary for the intellectual development of students if they want to excel in different fields of life.
On the other hand, some of the drawbacks which affect students badly when they leave their home are loneliness. Out of home, far away from parents, in a different city with a different type of people, they may feel a bit of disparity and sorrow. Some of them may not able to concentrate because of the different environment. Along with this, another factor is that those who live outside the home, may have great expenditures, so that they have to spend a great amount of money in order to fulfil their needs. For example, when someone goes to London from Nepal, he should have a great reserve of money in order to enjoy a healthy lifestyle and live comfortably in this city, otherwise, things become worse with the passage of time. Hence, it is also cleared that life out of home is not easy as well.
In conclusion, when considering living inside or outside hometown, there are both merits and demerits of that development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83673469388 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64107438517 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507288629738 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9270388046 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240781910069 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904919555749 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446320866468 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150003364632 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464665619216 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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