Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that an increasing number of women now starts a family and gives birth considerably later than our ancestors did. I believe that there are both financial and social factors that can be attributed to this trend, and I subscribe to the notion that it holds more advantages than disadvantages.
The option of having children at a more mature age recently has been common among women for several reasons. Firstly, regarding financial situation, the cost of raising a child is enormous. Basic expenses that exist on the journey of upbringing an offspring are food and clothing cost, vaccine expenses, education fee. According to some researches, it costs an average household in the West $200,000 to raise a child until adulthood. Therefore, before embarking on parenthood, a woman should possess an adequate amount of savings to make ends meet by spending longer time working before welcoming her first child. Secondly, in social terms, having children at a young age can be a huge drawback on a woman's career. In recent days, while women are well-educated and more ambitious in pursuing higher study or achieving certain positions in the society, it is difficult for them to focus whole-heartedly on their job if they keep worrying about a toddler at home. For example, 40% of managers avoid hiring younger women to get around maternity leave.
In my opinion, the positive aspects of this trend outweigh the negative ones. On the one hand, it is biologically proven that women's eggs are at the best quality in the golden period from 20 to 24 years old. On the other hand, the ultimate objectives of reproduction is to create a more advanced and elite generations for the society. A child raised by a mature mother with higher social class undoubtedly enjoys a superior education and lifestyle than a child born in his mother's golden period but grow up in poverty with a mentally immature parent does.
In conclusion, women are choosing to push maternity until a later point in their life for economic and social reasons, and I opine that the benefits are more obvious than the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92372881356 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73082618695 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612994350282 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6988262772 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150872140279 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468563182403 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479817924374 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950137867219 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340795524817 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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