Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In modern society, more and more women tend to delay parenthood. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and I would argue that the benefit of tendency is less significant in comparison with its drawbacks.
To begin with, there are two primary reasons for the claim that an increasing number of women prefer to start a family later in their life. First and foremost, women in the modern age might be career driven and climb up the corporate ladder. It means that they want to achieve that feeling of accomplishment first before devoting a huge amount of time to build up a family because in many cases women cannot maintain a healthy work-life balance. Furthermore, being financially capable also affects the decision of women about giving birth later as they want their offsprings to grow up to be well behaved and emotionally stable without the need for family financial support. For instance, many children have to drop out of school to shoulder family financial burdens.
According to the health issue, I strongly believe that the drawbacks of this trend are outweighed by advantages. On the one hand, giving birth to the first children at an old age could bring dangerous complications to both pregnancies and their child. This is because women’s fertility begins to decrease at age 30 which puts their children at higher risks of birth defects such as Down, intelligent disability and other diseases related to gene mutation. More than that, pregnancies also are more likely to suffer from cardiovascular problems, diabetes, high blood pressure or even leading to mother’s death during pregnancy. In other words, delayed parenthood usually involves medical consultation in order to predict the rate of birth defects in their children.
To conclude, it is obvious that there are various reasons for putting off having kids and some benefits behind these reasons. Despite that, I concur that the disadvantages of this decision are more significant than the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, such as, in many cases, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15692307692 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73371412174 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590769230769 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5434867316 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203274675294 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650454012587 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037234187679 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102937047588 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362762698805 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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