Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?
So far, there are conceptions that the gender of men and women will have some differences in characteristics or abilities in society. This means, both male and female will have some suitable jobs for them. I completely agree with this opinion and in this essay, I will give some examples supporting my view.
To begin with, although in recent years, gender equality is more and more confirmed, we can not avoid the difference between both men and women in their physical strength that impacts on their jobs.There are some jobs just for men only since demanding on high experience and deeply such as architects, engineers, drivers,policies, technology information and so on. In fact, there are some women who are a deliverer or manual labor, but just because of their situation, they must do these jobs, by contrast the other women will not choose unsuitable jobs for them.
Furthermore, women will make more money thanks to some jobs requiring finesse or patience such as make-up artists, fashion designers, nurses, accountants, especially these jobs relating to taking care of beauty. From that, if male would prefer to work in these careers, they need to put in more effort than that of women. By contrast, women must try hard, if they pursue technical and scientific careers.
On the other hand, there are some people who believe that the government should have gender equality in working. Their concept women always have a lower salary than that of male employees. From that, they hope in the office environment or the others will have an equality between men and women.
To sum up, in my view that both males and females want to achieve a good job in any industry, they must put their effort and try to learn more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, in fact, such as, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58998809213 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2842985717 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348421881531 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132649704623 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755498549574 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18664923547 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974238246814 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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