People have different views about whether the government should offer financial support on outer space adventure. While it may have some benefits to some extent, I believe that problems on earth deserve more funds.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people harbor the view that we should conduct space research. Firstly, outer space exploration provides us an opportunity to gain a deeper understanding of the universe. We may find other life during this process and even these wise lives could share some useful experiences to help us deal with the problems that we are facing on earth. Secondly, as human beings have lived on the Earth for so many years that we are sooner or later going to confront the fact of resources crisis. In this sense, it seems necessary to find another planet that suitable for living.
On the other hand, spending money on unsolved issues on earth has a more direct relation to our daily life. The government funds are limited, so other infrastructures would be underfunded if the space research cost a large proportion of money. For example, if the schools received less support, students could not get a better education, which would have a negative impact on the whole society. In addition, instead of exploring other alternative planets, it is more realistic for the government to allocate its money on protecting the environment and tackling these unsolved problems to make our earth a suitable place to live again.
In conclusion, while I can understand why some people think outer space exploration is worth the money, I would argue that governments should prioritize tackling these unsolved issue.
- Many people believe that social networking sites have had had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree 89
- One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees The developed nations in the world should tackle this problem by taking in more refugees To what extent do you agree with this opinion 91
- It has been said that people who read for pleasure have more developed imaginations and language skills than people who prefer to watch TV Do you agree or disagree 90
- Television has changed the quality of life for an ordinary person. Do you agree or disagree ??? 11
- It is the responsibility schools to teach good behavior in addition to providing formal education To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07664233577 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64769640124 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8060169779 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209132373334 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782765406705 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502121789528 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133492719041 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195466975171 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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