More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?
These days, people tend to have a diet food and work out from numerous health problems. People more and more eat healthy meals with their family and do sports on a daily basis due to the fact that they wanna improve their health as well as keep fit. In this essay, I would give many ways to encourage people to have diet food and work out frequently.
On the one hand, there is an abundance of reasons why people regularly have healthy food and work out. In the first place, during the spread of covid 19, people experienced a lot of symptoms after having covid. Therefore, people are likely to eat healthy food, such as eating more vegetables and doing sports, namely, football or skateboarding, which offers them to enhance their health and maintain a healthy lifestyle. To take me as a demonstration, 2 years ago, I often ate fast food, namely hamburger or sandwich and stayed at home to watch films and play video games however after I infecting covid 19, I took up changing my daily routine. During the day I usually eat a lot of vegetables and in the evening, I will go for a walk with my mom, sometimes, I play football with my close friends in the stadium.
On the other hand, there are many approaches to encourage citizens to have a diet food and do sports frequently. To begin with, the authorities are expected to encourage residents and raise their awareness about health. Furthermore, the government should equip with sports equipment for people to exercise. To take my neighborhood as an example, the park near my house is equipped with a lot of physical equipment, which is convenient and it allows people could do work out in a daily routine. In addition, television stations should be created programs on how to become well-built, it is a motivation and innovation for people.
In conclusion, this trend becomes popular and it brings numerous merits for citizens, and I am still of the opinion that governments are expected to invest a huge amount of money in equipping and raising the awareness’s residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ilms and play video games however after I infecting covid 19, I took up changing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75211267606 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70499402221 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0291751616 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249747245379 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860371081539 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068229754706 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14431136086 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073921113383 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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