More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative development?
These days many people brand conscious they give priority to buying branded things like clothes, car's and cell phones. This essay will discuss why people followed this trend and i personally believe that it is negative progress
To begin with,the main reason why masses choose well known products,just for flaunt,majority of people wants to show off and they think that buying branded products is status symbol that is why many people consumed huge amount of money on these items. For example, a recent study found that, many people bought famous products to show their status among theirs relatives and friends. Thus they spend a lot of money and some people also taking loans to buying branded stuff due to this they are facing financial problems
Moving further, in modern world so many people like to bought well known items but it lead to negative trend because it neglected traditional product and these products quality is high then branded products. For instance, the recent research concluded that, many people give preference to famous brand rather than others products. Hence, it affects the popularity of traditional products and it also leads to vanish these products
In conclusion, present time huge number of people love to bought branded things only for showing their status.From my point of view, this progress is negative because it is harmful for traditional things and it also impact on manufacturing of these products
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15319148936 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45634036066 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548936170213 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.191891092 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.833333333 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.1666666667 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8333333333 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186711542062 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106498127417 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486911284433 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117399187974 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044939340474 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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