More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
People in the present period like to buy clothing, automobiles, and other products from well-known labels. The legitimacy of well-known companies and people’s desire to flaunt their status are the main factors that could explain this tendency. Personally, I believe that this is a generally lousy development because it contributes to the widening gap between the rich and the poor.
There are two primary explanations for why individuals choose to purchase goods from well-known companies. First, compared to smaller businesses, well-known brands provide goods of higher quality. In addition, it is clear that numerous fake goods are offered for sale at reduced costs and are solely intended for temporary use by consumers. In contrast, while those from well-known brands may cost more, they are reliable and provide users with a sense of satisfaction. Second, many today like to flaunt their riches or social status. Luxury automobiles from manufacturers like Porsche and Mercedes serve as a prime illustration of this. Due to their materials and distinctive qualities, these are frequently very expensive. As a result, they are viewed as a tool for the wealthy.
From my vantage point, it is appropriate to state that this trend has a detrimental effect on the advancement of society because it may result in a number of societal issues involving the rich and the poor. Poor people frequently lack lucrative employment opportunities, making it incredibly difficult for them to make ends meet and afford luxury goods. Contrarily, those who are wealthy are able to not only provide for their basic needs but also acquire luxury items that can make them happy. There may be tension and disputes in society as a consequence of this disparity between the wealthy and the poor.
In conclusion, buying products from well-known brands is increasingly common because they are high-quality and allow consumers to flaunt their riches. But this would seriously jeopardize societal stability and safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
People in the present period like to buy clothing, automobiles, and other produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34493670886 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8866917925 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2045686818 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143176511608 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437847900703 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241495239886 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865352288345 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204770931471 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.