More people use their own car rather than public transport. So it is up to the government to encourage people to use buses and trains instead. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people nowadays using their private vehicles to go to work or other activities rather than using the public transport system. That’s why the amount of private cars has been claimed to be traffic congestion and air pollution in many countries. So, I completely agree with the idea that the government should advise people to use public transport instead of using their own cars.
When we talk about the benefits of using public transport, it helps people financially save money. According to the researchers taking public transportation instead of owning a vehicle can save on average nearly $10000 a year and people can save other expenses related to their private cars like maintenance, parking and expensive fuel price. Also, taking the train, bus and trams are safer than driving a car because there are less or no accidents occurs in public transport than car travel does. In addition, most the public transportations and related transit centres have a high level of security system which can help to reduce crimes.
On the other hand, traffic congestion is one of a common situation that most counties are suffering from. The government can directly motivate people to use public transport by introducing the considerable price of fares and season tickets. For example, they can give the concession card to the school children and senior citizens in the country and introducing the weekend reduced fare can help people to travel in lower price. Another possible idea is that advertising on newspaper and television about what will happen when drink and drive can be a help to society to more attract public transportation and reduce fatal accidents.
Finally, I believe public transportation is useful in both economical and physical health of individuals and it brings financial benefit to communities and it provides various job opportunities to the people which government should more consider and encourage to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... consider and encourage to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25559105431 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79883510356 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7975036236 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390038021349 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153254219344 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129917795599 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247671682069 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10895143407 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.