Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures.This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Irrefutably, it is a fact that if health is gone,everything is gone. Numerous nations consume large amount of money on health facilities rather than on health awareness. Several individuals opine that this amount of money should spend on health awareness to keep people fid as friddle. I strongly agree with this notion and this essay would shed light on the valid standpoints in the consequent paragraphs.
To commence with the favour of notion , there are abundant of factors behind the rubric. The first reason is that, Nowdays individuals do not live in healthy lifestyle. Owing to our poor way of living ,a plethora of diseases arises and people become weak and surfing disease. To examplify a research of oxford university states that if the lifestyle is better , then the nation will become healthier and strong. So awareness of health is important than health services.
And the second biggest reason is that government can spend more money on hospitals rather than medical institutions Instead of paying money on hospital government pay more attention to the medical institutions because through medical institutions we can provide a lot of information about health to the peoples.So medical institutions are beneficial for people to stay healthy and fit.
In compendium, I completely agree with this rubric.If health budget spend on health awareness, it will be beneficial for nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2600896861 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87839461429 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578475336323 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.2765069912 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310134813118 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110539155095 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875393156824 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192460670348 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925407271021 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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