The most important things in life are free of cost
Do you agree or disagree?
Life ,at every sphere, requires some priceless commodities which a person cannot get by buying them from anywhere. This essay agrees with the aforementioned notion and those precise things will be demonstrated in the upcoming fragments.
To commence with, happiness is the first and the foremost thing which people are searching for everywhere and want to spend some ecstatic moments. Several individuals try to search happiness but remains intact with it because one cannot buy the same. then comes family, if we observe such things from wide range ,we came to know that they are connected with each other in some certain ways . Individuals who are exempted from love of family members suffers from loneliness all through the life and become indolent at a certain point of time. Moreover, blessings which a person gets from helping others is a feeling of an another level and assists in dignifying the fortune in life. To cite an example , living with loved ones brings positivity as well as spreads happiness in the surrounding in addition to it children always remains in shadow of their parents filled with blessings .
Furthermore, other aspects which can be considered primary components but are surely not connected with income of a person. Self respect , being an element with great significance as everyone requires to be respected by theirs friends and peers . Thereafter , comes success or successful life ,the key to accomplish several long term as well as short term life goals is hard work. Willpower and dedication which a person engross while performing numerous tasks can not be bought from any store . These must be inculcated by a person as the most significant aspects are earned but can not be bought from anywhere.
To recapitulate, it does not matter at what level a individual reaches in life ; however , how happy , blissful and hardworking a person is matters a lot for everyone living in this globe. Money is just a materialistic thing which is vital at some extent but can not be compared with above mentioned attributes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06213017751 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73660244312 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60650887574 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.555267316 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.066666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860311191334 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317790590719 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268841395106 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613206209054 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211580536194 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.