Most people prefer ready to eat ready meals rather than home made for these days.
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, the vast majority of people would like to have convenient food than homely food due to its benefits, but it also has some drawbacks which will discuss in this easy.
Many people consider fast food is tasty and delicious. This is due to the fact that in order to attract the public, the eateries often add more chemical substances and food colour. As a result, people are attracted by this food items and eat more and enjoy it. Further more, having food from restaurants and online can save the time for many especially those work more hours because they may not get time to cook at home. For instance, today, some food corner provide a massive discount and cash back offers to customers through mobile applications like Zomato, Swiggy, Uber eats and so on for attract to the public. Consequently, it is clear that one can save time and money.
On the other hand, it also have immense disadvantages which will adversely affect to the individual. Eating excessive amount of junk food seriously harmful to health. This is because, a considerable amount of chemical contents are to be used while making it which contains more fat, carbohydrates, salt and other substances. Subsequently, it creates many health issues such as diabetes, heart problems, cholesterol, obesity and other severe health ailments especially among youngsters when they consume it. Another drawback is that some food is expensive to buy so impoverished people unable to buy and taste it like biriyanI for example.
To sum up, this fast pacing world, many people would not have adequate time to cook at home and therefore people consume more restaurant food. It not only provides benefits to people, but also dangerous to health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96864111498 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60393231938 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588850174216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.663413856 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101714850519 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381298304621 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312639700905 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689879790321 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115431934931 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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