Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As the world has evolved to the stage at which coordination has been witnessed in all aspects and sectors among nations. Some believe that top prioritised problems could only be tackled by worldwide attempts. In my opinion, it depends on circumstances for countries to work together in order to figure out the solution for a particular issue, the details will be discussed below.
It is well-known that some severe and accidental challenges that affect live of many people would demand the attention of global community right away. Natural disasters, climate change, terorrism are out of control of a particular country would require mutual effort of global commnunity to deal with. This is because once these hardships occur they would persist and expand constantly. Therefore, solutions have to be implemented to mitigate their increasingly widespread impacts, otherwise they may reach to neighbor countries. For instance, Covid 19 epidemics, which broke out in 2019 and spread out quickly globlally. Thus, without international cooperation to find a way for it, more lives would be taken.
Apart from international coordination, there are some proritised issues can only be coped with by certain countries or regions themselves. For instance, sudden increase of domestic crimes and violence need promt strategies from the national and local authorities to eliminate these risks and international interference in such cases seems late. In addition, the degree of a problem is an important factor when it comes to intervention of international parties. A sudden flood or electricity cut happen at an small area which have a limited impacts upon the local inhabitants may not cause worldwide concern. Finally, developed countries tend to be able to resolve their own urgent issues rather than depend on support from the outside world. Thus, the need for gathering countries for an important issue would not always exist.
In sum, cooperation among countries are normally inquired for some serious challenges which could have potential to expand to other areas. However, supports are unnecessary, if problems are minor and could be confronted by local governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dden flood or electricity cut happen at an small area which have a limited impacts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41124260355 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93553301536 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1571700221 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.588235294 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143120050437 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480842591701 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537705658549 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853091602008 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219661727022 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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