not so many people use a bicycle although it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport
These days, a lot of private transports are being developed more and more. However, people usually prefer using car to riding environmentally friendly vehicles as bicycle. The essay will explain the problem and give some possible solutions.
To begin with, there are two main reasons for why citizens do not a lot of enjoyable from riding bicycles. Initially, provided that people use the car or motorbike, they will save much time and physical power. It means that they can focus completely on their work and do more quickly. Secondly, as long as they utilize cars, they will not be effected by weather. For example, students will spend 1 hour going to school by bicycle but they will only waste 15 minutes travelling to there by bike. Although most people know that either car or motorbike is not friendly environmentally, their convenience can not be denied. They are completely suitable in modern life. Therefore, there are more and more people who want to use transports which consumes fossil energy.
One of the most possible ways which encourage citizens to utilize bicycles as a main vehicle is for the government to raise the tax. As long as the tax is too high for people to buy private transportation, they have to use cheaper vehicles as bicycle. Besides that, the government should educate consciousness of people and makes them understand about benefits when they use bicycles. Parks and roads should be had some bicycles for citizens to use freely.
In conclusion, consuming bicycles is the best solution to protect the environment. The government should have effective answers to encourage people use them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...know that either car or motorbike is not friendly environmentally, their convenie...
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...e answers to encourage people use them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0594795539 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74563944313 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8478379491 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0588235294 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269788699804 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859193982808 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062837244004 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179939251498 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494560811116 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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