Nowadays, creations of technology such as robots are using rapidly all over the world. What do you think does these development have more advantage or disadvantage ?
It is true that inventions of modern technology such as robots have contributed to make easy and solve the daily disruptions of people. In my view, rising tendency of people in such invention can have both negative and positive consequence.
There are two key drawbacks of human-based creation from the prospective of individuals and economy. The impact over the individuals is that people are losing their opportunities, rights and social interaction; meaning that numerous use of robots has replaced man-power resulting more difficulties and disruptions to earning a living. For example, many people, even from hotel waiters to scientists, have lost their jobs due to the invention of variety of robots. Likewise, human rights and interaction are having less because of door-to door amenities by man-made creations. From the economy prospective impact is that a huge sum of money and natural raw sources are being used to develop this creation. creating devices which works as a human is not easy, in this sense that massive budget, researches and observations ,and different natural properties have to be applied to achieve it that can be economical burden.
On the other hand, mentioned disadvantages can be taken as opposite angle. Firstly, rather than losing opportunities people have been saved form being injury. This is how, daily disruptions, which might more horrific and harmful doing in the involvement of individuals such as from manufacturing of small devices to observation of planets, can be completed through the technology inventions. In addition, it has also more benefits in aspect of economy. People have achieved great breakthrough thought it costs a huge change on its creation. To support the ideas, for example, having worked with robotic waiter, owner of that restaurant should not pay salary that he should have paid for human waiter; in this sense any organisation can earn a large money by robots.
In conclusion, rising use of technology’s creations have contributed in both negative and positive measures that I mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32415902141 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96391651868 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9400456411 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.066666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195813664824 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662113555395 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373635008008 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130277297235 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102291705139 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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