Nowadays culture is much the same all around the world when compared to previous times. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Almost there are not persons who without a shadow of a doubt certify that we all live in a world where overwhelmed in satellite dishes and electromagnetic. One of inevitable results, directly effecting on people life style, is convergence of cultures together, i.e. the world village. this matter probably will be escalated by passing time. Although I believe this phenomenal has own positive advantages, personally I cannot shut my eyes on negative one. In this essay, we will essay to discuss about both aspects.
It is crystalline that drifting together of culture leads to arresting progresses in most of the fields, from scientific issues to reciprocal comprehension of alienated culture. About the latter notion, one of efficacies is it tends to be a panacea for persons suffering from malady of xenophobia, or at least extenuating miscomprehension and lenient the acceptance other cultures. In the previous times, when cultures used not to be adulterated with each other, some skirmishes and fracas happened between two ethnic groups stemmed from misunderstanding of culture. For instance, a performance in a ritual ceremony was considered as a humiliation to another culture, kindling fire of war.
On the other hand, nearing cultures to each other to some extent bring about some problems. One of the gravest one is forgetting the culture of our ancestral, leading we cannot downright hand down our cultural heritage to our posterity. And gradually it will be likely consigned to the dustbin of history. Therefore, it affords a context that opulent countries abuse from this state to diffuse their culture into other, and substituting it step by step over time.
To recapitulate briefly, convergence of culture is like a double-edge sword. While, From one perspective, it begets some progressions and precludes most of gratuitous wars, from other side, poor nations progressively lose their culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, if, so, therefore, while, at least, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38079470199 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11094080969 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1280343778 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132835493997 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428164049898 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345512245797 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744968354668 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427031888682 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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