Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improve the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
us;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">Improving our way of living is considered very important in our lives, time being one of the prosperous aspect of it as each one of us think about saving time in mostly all the daily routine things including commuting, working and all. preparing food is one of these few now a days where some time can be saved and utilised for other things. so this easy preparation of food items has absolutely made people's life easier.
talking about manual preparation of food which is now replaced by some automatic preparation by the help of technical and more user friendly machines has helped a lot in saving time and also the food is good in most of the ways. Previously, there used to be a whole mess involved in preparation of food items. For example if I talk about breads (Chapati's) made by hands in India, a lot of efforts is there is making those as we have to make a dough first them prepare the specific shape and then bake it and only after this all we can eat it but now there is only one machine involved in which you have to put wheat flour and water and you'll get the end product directly that is the bread, which is totally a no mess thing. some of the ready to eat foods are also making a count in making people's life easier because you don't have to do anything just bake and eat easier than ever before.
this is the positive side that we have if food preparation is done in this way which will provide you an easy going life with no hustle bustle, but there are some cons to it too as these ready made foods as lack many of the vitamins and proteins that are important for living a healthy life also sometimes the quality is not good too. As now a days no one wants to waste their time in these time consuming things such as travelling to work or preparation of food on own while it's a good alternative if someone wants to live a happy going life.
To Sum up, although food preparation has been made easier and also the living quality is greatly improvised. so, we can rely on the same for sure but we cannot totally depend on these because some taste and mineral issues will always be there as everything comes with a boon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while, for example, such as, talking about, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40346534653 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91721126364 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492574257426 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.006057753 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.727272727 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7272727273 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145928173693 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698251502454 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369550740289 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963225739814 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190982077324 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.