Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Presently most people are suffering from variety of Health issues. So many people amongs them are going for unconventional medicines and treatment other than consulting a doctor. However, this situation can be effects both positive and negative ways. This essay will discuss that both benefits and drawbacks with examples and the writers conclusion will be given accordingly.
Nowadays, health issues become a major problem of the society. As matter of fact people to go for alternative medicines without checking whethe they are good or bad. This kind of situation leading peopls to some disadvantages without a clue. Firstly, there are so many vendors who are looking for take advantage of these situation so most peopls are become easy prayers for them and it may cause innesents losing their mony for fake medicine. Secondly, it may be cause more damge to helth because they are not prepard to a better quality which can be inclueded harmful ingrediants. To prevent such insident like that it is better that consult a doctor for priscribe medicines for health issues
On the other hand most of consulted medicine can be expencive and poor people could not be able to afford to them. In such circumstance if there is no any other options, it is ok to go for some alternative medicine but people must make sure there are no risks using those medicine.
To conclude, Althoug alternative medicines are populer amongs most people, it contains both benifits and drawbacks. There for it is better try to take consultation of a doctor every possible oppertunity.
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Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
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Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
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Message: Did you mean 'this medicine' or 'those medicines'?
Suggestion: this medicine; those medicines
...must make sure there are no risks using those medicine. To conclude, Althoug alternative me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0694980695 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69704869158 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3426131446 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192570794356 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754417766537 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315516313216 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122079032242 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375045217784 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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