Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Travelling to far distance from tourism companies has widely increased. The global tourism services are creating more complex for passengers from different cultures. While, these days it is the famous and biggest market in the world. In this essay I will discuss on comforts for people and helping for people through them.
Perhaps most compelling reasons why I disagree to international tourism services creating problems is because these services are helping lot of travelers to their destinations which is one of the main criteria they believe is safety of the passengers. The arrivals and departures of the respective vehicles will be mostly on time. Every kind of seats available like from business class to economy class. Moreover, they cover very long distance with in short time and that would lead to be safe, secure and pleasant journey.
The distance is not be viewed as isolation. Another services which they provide is kind of reasonable. The booking for vehicles and cancellation for that will be available. These services will be results to reduce ambient and accidental damages, to decrease in fuel consumption, to increase in the economy for country. If the government bolster in funding to tourism services, there will be increase in vehicles to travel constantly and conveniently.
However, Insulating people is one of the key area. The people who suffers with the travelling companies in late services is going higher. Their services for passengers who travelling regularly not providing any kind of benefits. People who wants to cancel their booking for travel is not happening and if it is happening then their will be delay in refunding their money.
In conclusion, helping people with their safety and money refunding is one of the main reasons. I strongly disagree that travelling services are creating problems to people because they are servicing more than a million people around the world.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, while, in conclusion, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28478964401 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73000701115 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.194182467 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9473684211 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14726623529 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492934055862 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058995308325 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981121059879 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702914013931 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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