Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
In modern era of globalization some big cities have been home to people who belong to different parts of the world. This essay will discuss how the government of these countries shall maintain the harmony and peace between people of different cultures living in the same cities.
First of all, there must not be any discrimination between people on the basis of their background culture, their caste or color. All the citizens living in the country are working day in and day out and somehow contributing to the economy and development of the country. So, it is the responsibility of the government to provide them with equal rights and security. For instance, around 2008 in Australia there was massive hatred among the citizens of Australia against the immigrants especially Indians, many were killed and looted which lead to insecurity among the immigrants. They were in constant fear and some even returned to their native places. Ultimately, it was Australia who suffered the loss of their human resource. Thus, governments must ensure that each and every citizen is protected and win people’s trust then only they can contribute efficiently without any fear.
Secondly, because people of all cultures live in these big metropolitans all cultures and their traditions must be respected equally. Thus, various festivals and celebrations of all the cultures must be celebrated with same enthusiasm and vigor. Government should even include the famous festivals of other religions in the holiday calendar which shows that they respect all religions equally and such that all people can celebrate their own cultural values freely and happily. For example, in Canada apart from their native citizens there are a lot of immigrants from Punjab (in India) which is known for Sikh religion. Almost all major festivals of Sikhs like Gurupurab and Diwali are celebrated there, due to which Canada is really popular among Sikhs. Therefore, by taking such steps there is relationship of mutual trust that is built up between the country’s administration and its citizens.
In conclusion, it can be said that governments can ensure peace and harmony among people of cosmopolitan cities by mainly providing them equal rights and opportunities and at the same time giving respect to individual’s religious inclinations as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25268817204 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81896337595 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5982295551 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.125 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342116328944 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976694840736 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073055270374 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208824985401 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314802023799 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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