Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?
In the busy day, people may be going to get problems for arrange their time to rest in night. Moreover, it is happened regularly as we realize that nowadays many reasons which can make everyone has various activities disturbing them for having enough sleep. I believe that it is the biggest issue happening by worker. In my opinion, this problem can be addressed through controlling schedule by notes of daily activity plan.
Workers getting the hustle and bustle in their daily life incline to spend over day without thinking to take a rest in company, while they want to do that then completing jobs. It is not easy to go back to home in appropriate time as having to finish some targets. In addition, the place where they work commonly could give additional task to be accomplished in the day. For instance, courier must deliver order to some destinations based on target even overtime. The thing results that they are going to be late for coming back home, and it has not included doing housework yet.
To obtain enough sleep and make easier for people to afford creating schedule of daily activity, I propose a great solution: limits on time to work and daily plan. Arranging time about doing work will make workers to get clear period of work. It has to be effective when they are getting jobs, calculating for kinds and time of work are important. To give an example, if they can organize priority of work which has to do, it will be simpler to spare time for getting rest on night.
In short, while many people have issue about having enough sleep because of busy day, they are still able to solve the problem through way which do by themselves such as work effectively and daily plan. This kind of solution is a win-win for everyone, whether they really organize it or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to create'.
Suggestion: to create
...ep and make easier for people to afford creating schedule of daily activity, I propose a...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...whether they really organize it or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in short, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65930599369 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37431532127 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5687868008 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22953343386 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773441131855 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643236210814 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157428019854 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611886058139 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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