The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?
It is common issue that overweight is a healthy phenomenon in society. The thing has been improving and people who have the problem is at risk getting fatal illness. These statements are known as main subject which has happened with several causes.
One reason why there are many people getting overweight as they have bad diet. Consuming unhealthy foods are realized giving serious impact to people who do not aware about it. It is not few people having knowledge about how to arrange diet. They prefer to choose having food based on their liked. It is not seldom that they would take anything which they want. Such as everyone purchase sweet cake because the food can make their mood better than before. Even though many things which are able to improve their mood. It forms their being fat. Another reason why issue about overweight is happened causes they being busy have difficulty to plan schedule of work out while people have been stress enough with their job. They would rather spend their free time to rest than go to physical exercise.
Based on the problem that the thing has to be overcome. People are to be able to manage consumed foods. If they have draft about nutrition food which need to be consume, they would know what food which they have to buy. It makes them having good body. In addition, people could establish community with their friend to work out together. It would bring extra spirit for exercising than doing alone.
To sum up, it is evident that although a number of factors are resulting in an increased overweight problem. Solution to tackle the problem are available to governments and individuals. I think it should be resolved as soon as possible to avoid the potential danger to human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to have'.
Suggestion: to have
... to arrange diet. They prefer to choose having food based on their liked. It is not se...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...can make their mood better than before. Even though many things which are able to improve t...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'drafted'.
Suggestion: drafted
... to manage consumed foods. If they have draft about nutrition food which need to be c...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, as to, i think, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80666666667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24255806317 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7862532379 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5454545455 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265816803809 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788506077048 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696971341178 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171860940494 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165310168939 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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