Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
It is fact that there are many young couples who tend to defer their parenthood these days. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend, I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are two major drawbacks when people get married at later stages of lives. Firstly, aged people are able to experience the prenatal and postnatal period which may adversely affect on their health. For example, postnatal depression could be arised because their health will be declined during pregnancy and childcare stages. The second impact is that later childbirth is a main culprit of significant age gap between two generations. It is arduous for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits are more remarkable then such disadvantages. One reason for this trend is that singles have more time to lay a sound foundation for their future career at the early stages of employment. For instance, the experience of young labors will be accumulated to achieve high job promotions without any interruptions. Another reason is that kids are raised better by older parents. They not only reap the comprehensive education, but also inherit more good conditions in term of healthcare services or healthy meals and snacks. As a result, the children born to more wealthy parents can contribute to the society when they grow up.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the advantages of this having later babies is more significant than the disadvantages.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-03-21 | thanhlan0201 | 61 | view |
- Society is based on rules and laws It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do To what extent do you agree or not 89
- The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000
- In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and business to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries Explain the main causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions 61
- The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...nd postnatal period which may adversely affect on their health. For example, postnatal de...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...e that the benefits are more remarkable then such disadvantages. One reason for this...
^^^^
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... In conclusion, it seems to me that the advantages of this having later babi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13944223108 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84194747484 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4812847334 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255729700982 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724857163803 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561085254064 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144666011163 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550678171957 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.