Nowadays traffic in major cities is worsening.
What problems does it create? How can we help solve these problems as individuals?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is clear that at present, traffic is a serious issue in metropolitan. Big cities are witnessed a numerous of damage caused by traffic problems. This essay will discuss those drawbacks and give some tackle solutions as individuals.
One of the most dangerous result of traffic issue is pollution. Due to the dramatic increase of transportation, many big cities has experienced a huge amount of exhaust fume that above the average data. To illustrate, in 2019, Vietnamese government reported a significant risen of exhaust which could be harmful to people. Furthermore, not only pollution, but also accidents are the result of overcrowded traffic. The more vehicles on the road, the more changes to get hurt. According to some research, accidents tend to happen more on crowded conditions than on normal.
To this problems, although government play an important role in finding solutions, I believe it is our responsibility to take action as soon as possible. First of all, I think people should use public transport more frequent. This method can reduce the cacbon footprint and improve the environment. Moreover, it can also be useful to decrease the enormous data of accidents. Secondly, I think each person must be careful when they are driving. Especially on rush hours, people must not drive fast and try to pass other vehicles.
In conclusion, I understand the problems many large cities are dealing, however, it is not unsolvable. If people follow the right direction, traffic will improve
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18930041152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94396055644 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650205761317 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3929580626 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.1764705882 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0761975961415 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236861445233 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255585589215 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533989173817 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299646489318 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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