There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music ? Is the traditional music of a country more important and should be preserved or is international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society.
Nowadays, the world has witnessed a variety types of music from old to new. Music plays an important role in many parts of our life.There are some arguments regarding the nescessarities of traditional music and globally music. In my opinion, modern music has more benefits to a society.
There are many reasons why people need music in life. First of all, music is a great types of entertainment. For example, when people need relaxation, they often listen to instrumental music or wordless music, In addition, if people are in a party, music is a essential material to turn the party on. Furthermore, education through music is becoming more effective at present. To illustrate, there are more and more educated websites through music which provide users explanation of lyrics and difficult words such as Genius,com and students are more attracted by this kind of study due to the excitement it provides.
Although, preserving national music types is important, i believe the new-era music is now dominating the old music and plays an important part in people's life. One of the principle reason is a catchy melody and easily understand lyrics. The world is developing so fast that people only want something lazy to listen to. For example, it is clear that the domination of the modern music has grown through the century witnessed by enormous music festivals such as Ultra Music Festival which is held annually. Moreover, new music creates changes for youngsters to become famous and prosperous since it does not require a high level of music theory or instrumental compared with the past. With the expansion of technology, music industry is full of young artists using auto-tune in their music. Strangely, people love it.
In conclusion, people can not deny the fact that music is vital. It is my belief that new music is more important than traditional music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02258064516 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75622273913 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2212759423 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5882352941 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513273967652 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195722693124 0.084324248473 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107711773648 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.380707931211 0.151304729494 252% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280077046781 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.