Nowadays as women and men have to work full time. Household duties should be equally divided. Do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, when the award of the human being is rasing obviously, the society does not discriminate against woman. Each person is busy with particularly work full time. Many people believe that household duties should be responsibility for both women and men. I completely agree with this view.
There are two main reasons why housework needs to equally divided. One season is that although the same time spends their job in society, men are the representation for better physical health, so they can do homework easier than the woman. For many males, they think that chores which charge of females and they just want to concentrate on jobs outside. Rather than give their wife a hand, such as cleaning the floor, washing clothes or dishes, they tend to rest a breath. Besides, The woman has to deal with a high number of works in the office. Until they come back to their home, the women continue solving lots of homework. Without time to spend themself, females can fall into stress.
Apart from the practical opinion expressed above, I believe that Firstly, a home can happy or not depend on sharing obligation of each member. The husband divide household duties equally is a way to express understanding and sympathy toward the wife. Second, through that concern, the woman will have lots of time to take care of their family and help them feel fortunate and be respectful.
In conclusion for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that chores are a common responsibility for men and women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...believe that household duties should be responsibility for both women and men. I completely ag...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'divides'.
Suggestion: divides
... obligation of each member. The husband divide household duties equally is a way to ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, so, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89494163424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53399721379 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0654676065 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25579265704 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760848995105 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717908574223 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150713841606 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740247300276 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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