One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no doubt that the enhancement of medication has contributed positively to citizens’ living standards, some argue that this trend also has some drawbacks. Respectively, I do believe that the former definitely outweighed the latter in some aspects.
First of all, the increase in humans’ lifespan means the motivation of researching therapy methods grows. Old-aged people are too weak to protect their bodies from such a large amount of viruses and bacteria existing due to the rising pollution, which means they have to suffer from various diseases from time to time, or even gain some simultaneously. Tackling this issue, medical employees can gradually improve their ability to improvise. Moreover, with longer lifespans, people such as professors, politicians, researchers,...can have more time to serve the community like what they have sacrificed then, which is strongly dedicated to the economy’s development.
On the contrary, the swelling of the ratio of the older population can put youngsters under enormous pressure. Since the high-qualified experience of the elderly frequently eclipses the newer’s talents, numerous fresh graduates can easily be unemployed if they do not show any specializations. Furthermore, the better medical service, the more dependence on medication people put in instead of healthy ways of life and diets. this could lead to a huge amount of money for medicine and retreatment, which again puts the young generation at a disadvantage.
Overall, despite the fact that the elevation of life expectancy may bring a number of pitfalls, I do believe that it will be not a burden, but an asset for the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, no doubt, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45945945946 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16082066198 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660231660232 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.602485811 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176023511944 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607650521961 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416620856284 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946838190863 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127884861019 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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