One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages
Nowadays, medical knowledge around to world has increased and has noticeably more effect around people's health and condition. Personally, while I think that sometimes the consequences could lead to some people regarding globalization. I still believe that development brings more benefit than harm.
At present, we have gone thought a lot of technological innovations, this could lead to more birth rates and less death rate which in turn cause overpopulation in our world which have quite a detrimental effects in distant future as foods, water, and other resources are being used more rapidly but the situation is unavoidable and is still happening at the current time.
However, I would argue that these drawbacks are outweighed by the benefits. Firstly, as a direct result of improved life expectancy, people who contributed so much to their society like writers, architects, or scientists can have a better life expectancy which allows them to keep in touch with the younger counterparts and share their ideas and thinking. Even if some people think these elders are more of a burden than helpful, they surely have more experience with their occupation as compared to the later generations. Secondly, this allows people to spend more time with their family and grandchildren. Working parents can leave their children in safe hands while at work. This made us realize the importance of having a grandfather and grandmother on the family.
In conclusion, lifespan profoundly benefits the family as well as society. We should feel obliged to treat our ancestors nicely like how to used to take care of us while we were still children.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-09-29 | KHUSHALI SANDIP RAMANI | 56 | view |
| 2023-08-09 | oanhlilies | 78 | view |
| 2023-03-27 | cinderel | 56 | view |
| 2023-03-22 | ililmaidatuz | 73 | view |
| 2023-03-22 | ililmaidatuz | 56 | view |
- Many people now undertake extreme activities from hang gliding to mountain climbing Why do people risk their lives in this way and do you think is a good trend Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own Knowledge or exper 61
- The diagram below shows the production and processing of milk and dairy products for commercial sale Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 87
- Some people believe that students should take a gap year after finishing school and work or travelling during this period To what extent do you agree or disagree with this 61
- the pie charts and table gives information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000 84
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 92
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25660377358 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86731373834 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.2860278952 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147513147322 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515110603923 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381014765581 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777384119093 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598035407456 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.