Parents are busy nowadays and they were not able to give time to their children. So they are becoming in disciplined and careless.
what do you think are the main factors behind this?
what remedial actions can be taken by and the parents?
Parents play significant role in their offsprings life's. They are first teachers for their children. Nowadays, parents work round the colck in many fields, they have no time to spend with their children, therefore children are becoming careless and undisciplined. I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with reasons, First and foremost factors which comes in my mind is that, today parents are very busy because of their hectic schedule. They cannot spend time with their offerings. So children becomes more irritated and adopt bad habits. For example they give mobiles and vehicle to make their offsprings successful but they misuse all these things.
Moreover, children becomes Victims of adulteration through using of Internet. Along with this, a sole parent and sometimes harsh punishment to children by their parents may be a reason of becoming careless individual.
On the other hand, Every locks has a key likewise,every problem has a solution for example people should encourage to other people live in joint family in which parents can easily keep eye on their children they can reduce a problem by avoiding harsh punishment. Furthermore, mother and father should try to treat their children with a respectful manners which create positive impact on their children. Grandparents should give the moral education and make them understand to their traditional culture which play remarkable role to make the noble person.
In a nutshell,parents should be careful about their activity of their children, Because children are the future of upcoming genration.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'likewise', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26618705036 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.143884892086 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104316546763 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0251798561151 0.0501214627716 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0827338129496 0.0437548338989 189% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118705035971 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0179856115108 0.0403226058552 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.76064035017 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287769784173 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0575539568345 0.0861772015684 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0323741007194 0.021408717616 151% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143884892086 0.011925033212 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1591.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38955823293 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397590361446 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317269076305 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212851405622 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132530120482 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76064035017 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.0153729234 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7857142857 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1925481862 49.517814964 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 49.5126219162 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.6 1.69124875643 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435511428234 0.332605444948 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0819810712959 0.102741220458 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0571288238245 0.0668466124924 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564291746983 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186298948767 0.148594505496 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162342686295 0.134430193775 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089011566777 0.0742795772207 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.235888801727 0.324371583561 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0778295432256 0.0638462369009 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262931181343 0.228012699653 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722747816472 0.058150111329 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.