Needless to say, the internet has become a rampant media now a days. Some sections of the society nurture this thinking that parents had better not prohibit their kids from surfing the web. My views are in tune with this ideology.
To set the wheels in motion, the internet is a storehouse of knowledge. All the information is just a mouse click away. If children use the net, it will broaden the horizons of their knowledge. Moreover, children can remain updated with the help of latest technology. If parents discourage their children from using the net, they will become technophobes.
Moreso, the internet plays an important role in communication. Earlier, children used to have friends only in their schools and neighborhood. Thanks to the internet, they can now have a wide circle of friends all over the world. Furthermore, the young ones can their stress by watching videos, listening to music and playing video games on the net. The internet lends colour to their monotonous life.
On the flip side, every dark cloud has a silver lining. The internet has a darkside also. The internet casts an adverse effect on children's health. Youngsters spend huge chunks of time on their monitors. They are becoming mouse potatoes. It also promotes sedentary lifestyle. Spending long hours on the net can impair their eyesight. Last but not least, web media swallows a lot of precious time of tiny tots. This leads to poor academic performance.
In compendium, after pondering over the preceding information it is felt that the internet has merits and demerits but merits outweigh the demerits. Therefore, parents should not stop their kids from using the net.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ildren can remain updated with the help of latest technology. If parents discourage their...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63338757093 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0860532807 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.75 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.125 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339408561919 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829081027262 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682564009601 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172458819792 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438486378344 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.65 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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