Participating in a sport is as important for psychological health and social development as it is for physical conditions. Do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that playing sports is beneficial in general. As it will be explained in this essay for my argument, practicing these activities makes positive impacts on not only our physical health but also mental condition and social development of individuals.
Physical benefits of sports are undeniable. The most obvious one is about the improvement of muscular system of the players, with which they are able to do heavy works which require unusual strength; therefore, they can tackle a wider range of daily tasks compared to those living with sedentary styles. In the long term, as research has indicated, doing physical activities regularly could help prevent many health issues, from common ones like obesity to more fatal risks including cancer and cardiovascular diseases.
In addition to those benefits, individuals could also get many others, which might not be visible but equally valuable. From psychological perspective, sports players could relax and enjoy the games, which means helping to reduce stress level commonly being experienced in today’s society. Besides, almost all sports require people to focus on the game in order to win; hence, their concentrating ability would be improved as a result of frequent practice. Finally for the general social development of individuals, sports participants have plenty of chances to improve their teamwork skills while playing, and also make or enhance their friend circle with other players.
In conclusion, it is evident to say that sports benefits people in many ways, including improving physical health, bringing positive mental effects as well as strengthening relationships with others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...roved as a result of frequent practice. Finally for the general social development of i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, hence, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52140077821 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82307451748 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673151750973 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5298405309 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212266499178 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816468114482 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600093222348 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125274227782 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416839818731 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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