In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, we are living at the age of information and technology that knowledge is stored online. However, there are some negative facts about the online library in comparison to former ones, in my point of view, using online databases is reasonable.
Undoubtedly, today, people are getting easier access to sort of information on the internet so it turned into a gateway to mankind’s progress. The fact is that the significant advantage of online information, which known as its importance, is that everyone has access easily and cheaply to these resources with less possible time-consuming. Not only would people be knowledgeable in their specific ways but also the resources are always up to date. For example, mankind’s progress in science owes to online databases. It could be feasible to benefit the last outcomes of other’s scientific papers in order to continue their research process. Moreover, the advent of e-books raised needless of books and libraries in the form of physical, so that reduction in the use of paper meant less-harvesting woods then, an efficient trend to tackle global warming. Eventually, this is why are mankind is so thankful for this possibility.
Nonetheless, aside from all convenience of the internet and online libraries, there is some incontrovertible negative consequences. First of all, advertisers are onset to utilizing this ability and navigate consumers in a pleasant way and making money at the end. This trend could lead to making users internet-addicted which may end them into a sedentary lifestyle that is not healthy. Furthermore, everyone has the ability to upload information that means turning online databases into invalid ones in comparison to the past that people had to find an informed person patiently and eagerly. Finally, biologically, studies show that using a computer for a long time would rise some devastating impacts on human brain.
To sum up, the aforementioned remarks, despite some negative consequences which could be harnessed by taking a degree of control, online resources are fully beneficial for humans and without a little doubt can pace their progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, for example, sort of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33431952663 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09854290004 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8116675672 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116734056928 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372410004431 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315018817461 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585849160844 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383217420819 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.