In the past, most people lived in small villages, where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only knew a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and the disadvantages of living in small community?
More and more people are living in the big cities, which is not the same experience in the past because most of the people located in small villages. In the past, there were advantages and disadvantages to being members of a family.
I think there were many a variety of benefits. Firstly, children could play with other children near their home, so they learned communication skills. Secondly, each person belongs to family spend on much their time looking after each other, sharing work or anything in the life. Thirdly, member of a family known a lot of experience from people around, for instance, how to repair the house or how to grow a garden. Fourthly, everyone could support and help from many people who lived the same area, the most situation was anyone had problems, There were many houses also improve a crime rate. Therefore, part of a family's security was ensured. The relationship became better which made fall the jealous between families.
However, there are a lot of trouble which families had an encounter.
Traffic was crowded leading to pollute the noise, especially the accommodation located near the main road. Accidents also happened more than the place where a few people stayed. Pollution also increased quickly, water, air, for example. One of the difficulties was spreading disease. Children and elderly people were infected easier than adults.
In my view, advantages are more than disadvantages for living in small community. Although a number of people weren't high, citizens who live at this feel happier owing to the care of most people for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
... community. Although a number of people werent high, citizens who live at this feel ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02281368821 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55880258866 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0182072571 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7058823529 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316620618295 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831292302627 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895866339472 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167580090704 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115580553469 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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