People live longer today ,and therefore they should work longer?to what extent do you agree or disagree??
With the advent of the machine age technology "longevity "has been increased as a result; the question has been arising among the people. whether individuals do the job for a long time or not? I agree to a large extent that indeed the people should work for longer. It has many visible advantages for the individual as well as the nation. My preference is explained further with suitable reasons.
There are copious advantages for working to a lifetime. The most prominent one is that the economy loads on the country will be reduced. If the person works for a lifetime, he can fulfil their expenses, so there is no need to live life dependently, which is not only beneficial for the nation but for the individuals family too as inflation rate touching the sky, so it is damn difficult to cope up with the current lifestyle and dependent on a breadwinner per family.
Apart from this, if individuals works, they can interact with their colleagues, they can share currents situation about life or word, and enjoy they can enjoy at the workplace even though after some age they feel psychologically disturbed, it would be good for their personal development.
On the other hand, some counters argue that in a true sense, human being life is like a rollercoaster, every person adheres with the job for the lifetime it sounds more fatigued therefore individual needs to rest at least after retirement, as human life only one-time offer. In addition to this, during their working like , they have had to avoid all social life enjoyment, so they should stay at home; in order to, they can spend they can enjoy their quality time with their kith and kin.
In a nutshell, it can be concluded that although there are few questions raised against the working for a long time, I firmly believe that individual should do working to a long period for their physically, mentally, psychologically, and the most significant economic developments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whether
...tion has been arising among the people. whether individuals do the job for a long time ...
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Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...y beneficial for the nation but for the individuals family too as inflation rate touching t...
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Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ition to this, during their working like , they have had to avoid all social life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, at least, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90303030303 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81114862052 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.523887488 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152618528552 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677607571088 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103828631291 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086671275693 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346522574509 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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