People living in 21st century generally have better quality of lives then people born in early centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In modern era, technology is developed and lives of masses are better rather than past .I agree with this statement. There are many reasons ,such as ,Education, life standards and many more ,which I will highlight in forth coming paragraphs.
Education is the first reason of this trend. In these days all masses are educated and have knowledge about their living standards as compare to past because in past no any people want to go schools and get knowledge about their secure future. Today's, from early age children go to education center and do study and they get knowledge about living standards. Every person is lived in good personality but in past people do not have enough knowledge. For example, past time specifically girls cannot go to school but in these days with modern thinking both genders get equally importance in every work such as, driving, cooking, study. To elaborate, in these days people mostly follow western culture with this they live better in their life .
Moreover, many facilities are available in 21st century electronic gadgets are available in these days which is very helpful for people likewise, they communicate with each other and relatives with the help of mobile phones ,while in past people visit to every relative house for meeting them. However, in these days people can fulfill their needs easily because of money and jobs ,people are educated and get jobs and earn money for fulfilling their needs as compare to past. With the help of technology house facilities also available such as, houses are built with bricks and cement whether in past people live in mud house which is not good for living. Other point is that medical facilities are provided in modern approach which is helpful for living long time but in past mostly people dead from illnesses and without medical treatment. Therefore, life standards of people is better as compare to early centuries.
To conclude, I retraite my views by saying that it is true in modern era life standards of people is better rather than past.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95335276968 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38322279253 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495626822157 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1083430624 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222726300813 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908045273183 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583553165894 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126836664143 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455771212486 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...es of masses are better rather than past .I agree with this statement. There are m...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... of masses are better rather than past .I agree with this statement. There are ma...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h this statement. There are many reasons ,such as ,Education, life standards and ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...atement. There are many reasons ,such as ,Education, life standards and many more...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...sons ,such as ,Education, life standards and many more ,which I will highlight in...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...Education, life standards and many more ,which I will highlight in forth coming p...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ards as compare to past because in past no any people want to go schools and get k...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...not have enough knowledge. For example, past time specifically girls cannot go to school ...
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...with this they live better in their life . Moreover, many facilities are availa...
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...relatives with the help of mobile phones ,while in past people visit to every rela...
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...r needs easily because of money and jobs ,people are educated and get jobs and ear...
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...uch as, houses are built with bricks and cement whether in past people live in mu...
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...cal treatment. Therefore, life standards of people is better as compare to early ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...re, life standards of people is better as compare to early centuries. To conc...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...y centuries. To conclude, I retraite my views by saying that it is true in mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95335276968 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38322279253 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495626822157 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1083430624 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222726300813 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908045273183 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583553165894 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126836664143 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455771212486 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.