People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
Hitherto, establishing an ideal society has been formed in people’s thought yet multiple efforts just only stop at thinking. In my judgement, an ideal society could bring various merits for residents but also not less dislocations.
Admittedly, an ideal society has certain benefits for its citizens, especially for those of low status. In my perspective, an ideal society is one where everyone deserves to be treated equally irrespective of their social status. This means that now the beggar or the president are served equally. Therefore, in this society, there is not any crime which is caused by the impoverished and unfair world. As a consequence, resident’s safety is ensured exerting to the improvement of other aspects such as science and technology.
In contrast, various drawbacks are recorded in this civilization leading to the failure in constructing this world. Moreover, I think it’s impossible for humans to erect an ideal society in the future. First, this world renders unfairness among people. This can be explained by the fact that when there is no disparity between people, there is no motivation for people to make an effort. As a result, people become lazy and stop working which leads to chaos in the community. Second, before creating an ideal society, a country has to accumulate an immense amount of outlay to adapt to the residents’ demand. However, when a country assembles a huge amount of money, it causes an economic monopoly in the world which is conducive for starvation and financial burden in other countries.
To sum up, the ideal society has a multitude of negative effects albeit few merits. For these reasons, I decry that it would be a good idea to form an ideal community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a good idea to form an ideal community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, i think, in contrast, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1161971831 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8569056406 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7026277247 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385376920472 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124336334324 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927349718616 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250083526935 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341575790998 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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