People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.
What is your opinion about an ideal society
How can we create an ideal society?
It is undeniably true that the ideal society is the dream of every citizen. Many people often think about creating one, but most of them fail. I believe that if we all try hard to make this happen in reality, it will be a big win for humanity.
To begin with, the ideal terminology refers to the good instance according to me. Therefore an ideal society can be said as a good instance for us and another living being in order to live in harmony and ease. To develop one, there have to be certain problems to overcome which are, first, there should not be inequality, second, equal distribution of national income amongst citizens that means there has to be no gap between the rich and the poor. Also, last but not least, there should be no place for crimes.
However, to make such an idealistic place we should start with our homes at first by educating ourselves and making sure to keep our surroundings abided by the customs. This will help us, groom, whole society eventually thereby defeating our issues. But, in reality, some of the people try to advantage of their knowledge due to their greeds and dominance so that they can theft innocent others to get rich and steal significant things from them. Therefore along with education, we have to also make keen jurisdiction protocols in order to fight against such criminals. Unless we do not practise such standard laws, we will not be able to form a dream society because such kind of people may ruin the citizens' peace and prosperity.
To sum up, We can set an example as a perfect society, but before that, we have to individually pledge to be an ideal citizen first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, as to, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61512027491 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44890150844 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4480018629 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300702349609 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105464972919 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828988352107 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201015330922 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859841569021 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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