People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, globalization creates opportunity for people to live and work in a different nation. Many people believe that foreigners should follow traditional customs of the place they want to settle. I agree with this statement as there are many benefits if an outsider could follow local rules.
On the one hand, it is argued that each people has the right to practice their own customs. This is due to different beliefs between foreigners and local people and therefore, the freedom of practicing religions should be respected. Moreover, by allowing others not to strictly follow the local customs, the community would look more attractive and friendly toward foreigners. This would attract more investment from wealthy migrants and lure high-skilled workers who are interested to live in a tolerant and receptive community.
On the other hand, there are numerous benefits if people could practice the same traditions of local residents. The first reason is that if a newcomer could understand and able to perform traditional habit, it is easier to gain friends. Locals are often proud of their traditional heritage and they would have great respect for those to follow their customs. The second benefit is that new migrants could avoid violating local laws and regulations. In many countries, unfollowing traditional customs could be sentenced and be kept in jail. As a result of this, newcomers should research and follow local customs before establishing their lives in a new country. Finally, understanding the traditional behavior of local business owners could open new employment opportunities for newcomers as the employers prefer to work with ones who share the same habits as theirs.
In conclusion, there are many arguments of whether people should not follow common practice of the locals. However, I believe that if a person would like to live stable in a new environment, it is better for them to adopt local practices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27009646302 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81360587784 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527331189711 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4586574711 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.4375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257082712519 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949298994168 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067068057859 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176684629665 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532125830829 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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