People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A few subjects are as likely to provoke controversy as it is necessary for newcomers to adapt the rituals and conventions when they are settled in another country. I completely with this opinion.
On the one hand, there are a myriad of problems if immigrants do not comply with formality and praxis of the new country. Firstly, it is no doubt that a number of challenges could be identified for new residents in terms of business, studying and culture shock or facing the discrimination. For example, foreign enterprises need to require considerable effort to approaches indigenous customers and have effective tactics without unless they have an excessively cultural understanding. Secondly, people who reside in a new nation might fall foul of the law that has resulted in several punishments. Being compelled completing a certain number of hours in service to the community, for example, in Singapore, if people litter the street or spin gum.
On the other hand, we should not turn a blind eye to the expected desirable benefits. When it comes to accommodating to a new custom and praxis, it is noticeable that local people have a proclivity to accept and welcome migrants who assimilate into their cultures and the way of living. As a result, newcomers would get the establishment of closer links with native people and more integration. Furthermore, it seems to be a valuable opportunity for immigrants to enjoy the traditions and be capable of taking part in community life. For instance, it would be a magnificent chance for people who begin to live in Viet Nam to experience Tet holidays and conventional festivals in there with the aim of understanding the value and meaning of these traditional cultures and rituals.
In conclusion, people totally need to conform themselves to customs and traditions of a new place where they start to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
... opinion. On the one hand, there are a myriad of problems if immigrants do not comply...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04885993485 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0643693608 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586319218241 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8774400727 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.230769231 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244972637275 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814285189705 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699655578445 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159342719511 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081182059515 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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