The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations.
Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Internet has been playing a major part in connecting and improving our social lives and economy. Following this trend is the solicitude of individuals about providing their personal datas for internet enterprises, and some have concerned about its drawbacks. To my opinion, the benefits of this act are far more than its downsides.
First of all, there are many websites require personal information as a way to identify and contact. For instance, social media like Facebook and Twitter always ask for our e-mail or phone number to create an account. Also, sometimes, your age is needed to ensure you are eligible to use their services. Secondly, individual datas are essential to shop online. Many people, who are in a rush, find it quicker and more convenient to buy things from the internet. Therefore, they need to distribute private details to register for payment. In addition, these companies after receiving your information will save it into their systems to accelerate the speed of, for example, confirming, verifying, signing in, paying, ect., when you come back the next times.
Nonetheless, users of the internet face against some massive threats from this action. They often are stolen private information, hacked devices or accounts, and receiving spam messages. This happens when some internet organizations failed to secure their customers' information and let the hackers leak out these valuable datas, which leads to many significant and hazardous information attacks.
All things considered, some threats may exist along with the outstanding advantages of leaving your private identity in the hands of colossal internet syndicates. In spite of that, many great, trusted businesses has come up with many methods for securing information for the customers to choose. For example, two-factored authentication, touch or face id, securing questions, etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
... massive threats from this action. They often are stolen private information, hacked devi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45360824742 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83480786207 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642611683849 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4796662531 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221747344325 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623915340876 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500482021625 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127320282202 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024616559625 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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