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Nowaday, resources energy play an important in economic development and the thriving of each country. Especially the Australia and France with fuel source had many fluctuated in 1980 and 2000.
In Australia, units of electricity production by fuel source in 1980 is divided into two equal parts. With coal held 50 units of total production of 100 units. And the other production held 50 units of all the rest, namely, hydro power with 20 units natural gas with 20 units and the least was oil with 10 units. Particularly, in 2000 in Australia, total production increased 170 units. Coal, hydro power were also went up whereas oil, natural gas significantly went down.
Move on to France. Generally, there was a equality between units of electricity production in 1980. Cost and natural gas occupied with 25 units, oil hold 20 units, hydro and nuclear power hold in turn 5 units, 15 units And in 2000, nuclear power hit a high with 126, coal and oil were equal with 24 units, natural gas and hydropower hit a low with 2 units
Conclusion, the units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000 is remarkably exchanged. Electricity production changed to people ‘s demand and the speed of development of our countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88317757009 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7222784703 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495327102804 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.0577432874 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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