Q : Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the effect of social media has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that both individual people and society are negatively affected by social networking services, while others argue otherwise. Personally, I believe that both arguments should be given equal weight. In the following essay, the evidence supporting this contention will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, it seems difficult to refute the idea that there are a number of advantages that can be derived from developments in social media. Perhaps the principal benefit is that the advent of social networking sites has revolutionised the way people communicate with others regardless of time and place considering that having access to the Internet is only needed. To be more specific, users are able to send messages to their friends as well as family members anywhere and at any time with greater ease. Furthermore, people can share interests with their acquaintances, which makes it possible for them to build a strong relationship with each other.
On the other hand, it seems short-sighted to contend that the advancement of social media merely brings with it positives. The most oft-cited argument is that adolescents who generally have difficulty distinguishing right from wrong are vulnerable to being exposed to crimes considering that offenders are easily able to target them by creating numerous fake profiles on social networking sites. This can even lead to an increase in the number of abductions, exerting a harmful influence on society. In addition, a multitude of students and employees are more likely to become addicted to social networking services. As a result, excessive usage of these services often prevents pupils and workers from concentrating on their work or studies, detrimentally impacting on their work or academic performance. In light of the above, I also find these persuasive.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, it can be concluded that each side of the debate has its strengths, as discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30172413793 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94353178621 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58908045977 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1208898694 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3125 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174230254056 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535769639728 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072260452861 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101691390336 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832634760842 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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