the responsibility for the protection of the environment is by a transnational organization or every country
While some hold the view that the every country has to preserve its own environment, the other highly insist that the international associate organization is useful than another ways. My partial support from the former view and I will state the reasons for my opinion before arriving at conclusion.
Firstly, these days according to all the harmful news about world live threat, there are many reasons to change and lose ideal location to live for animal categories , floras and humans. On the other hand known various natures with different emergency help activities. For instance the ocean situation has different features when compared with the desert area. As a result there aren’t same protocols to protect. As a result, the nations should to sort and decorate unique programs to flourishing experimental persons for controlling their situations.
The experimental sciences and researchers, can help the ordinary people to learn new nature serving to drop air, water and forest pollution. For example, through free course in schools and public areas . This is because the government who dedicate some more budget to these project is useful when the biological association had spoken about earth warming, the huge ice rocks melt. Although important activities were occurring.
In concoction, If all countries shared their information and local dangerous nature events with another government, they could control animal categories and flora in health location. Therefore it is necessary people raise their information carefully before everything.
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...earth warming, the huge ice rocks melt. Although important activities were occurring. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56302521008 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77918853065 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710084033613 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2556776503 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134480713234 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395378765049 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395358540957 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702287246548 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443153817437 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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