Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that the research of science should be carried out and managed by the governments rather than private business. Personally i completely agree with this view.

There are two main reasons why it needs to be controlled by the governments.

One reason is that many private companies might undertake the scientific research in order to several wrong purposes. Nowadays, without managing of the governments which they could take advantage of some gaps in law to maximize profit for their own. For instance, a number of organizations in Canada do some research about Marijuana products not support for the medical intention, but for earning money. Furthermore, The research should be organized by the governments in case it could turn the beneficial projects into the waste of time and money. For example, there is a lot of research of private companies run out of money and lack of labour lead the the failure during a period of time they do it.

Apart from the practical disadvantages expressed above, i believe that the research might be working well with the lead of government-decision making.Then, it is essential that they be responsible for scientific research . For example, they could support those private companies such as an amount of investment money, the legal law and other organizations such as WHO , UFC. Moreover , the government could test the research to figure out it would be right purpose or wrong purpose.

In conclusion, for the reasons i mentioned above, i strongly believe that the governments should control and carry out the science research rather than private business.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2213740458 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93812784433 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.181464645 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376908423997 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147528641398 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117704158644 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242934969944 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11014691671 0.056905535591 194% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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