Shopping has become a favourable pastime among young people. Do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?
In a world where consumerism prevails, the excessive want for more goods has become a common trend among youngsters without giving a second thought for its importance. Going to huge malls and lavishly spending on items have become a hobby of sorts among young people. I believe that, rather than doing reckless spending, parents and teachers must motivate the current generation of people to do productive activities like reading and doing chores.
It is often said that those who read are bound to achieve great feats in life. The youth must be inspired of the benefits of reading and must make it a hobby. A person who persuses books of various subjects will not only help him garener knowledge, but also will make him an exquite writer and a remarkable orater. Hence, youngsters must spend most of their freetime accumulating as much knowledge as possible.
Doing chores can make one more efficient and responsible in life. A person who is always idel without doing any sort of activity, will only dull the cognitive thought process and that same time will also will make that person inefficacious. For example household activities like going to the grocery store or watering the plants are works that will build characteristics that of responsibility and helpfulness.
In conclusion, young people actively partaking in productive activities like reading or doing household works can develop an all-round personality. This is beneficial for both the society as well to the individual. So it is hoped that teachers and parents well encourage the younger generation to spend their time wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14559386973 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77192407392 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590038314176 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5903842246 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173522149863 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579526786774 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617454606295 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103028141712 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766195953757 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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