Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Smoking leads to many health problems not just for the smoker themselves but also for the people within the vicinity. Given this context, concern has been raised to forbid smoking in public places. Although there are strong arguments on both sides, I am in a consummate discord with the ideology of permitting people to smoke in the community.
It is not a secret with what smoking can give onto our health. Medical studies have shown how our body responds when exposed to carcinogenic compounds found in cigarettes. Although the effects does not happen over night, but one thing for sure, it cause...
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command of the English
command of the English language is bad
Although the effects does not happen over night
Although the effect does not happen over night
even though he did not smoked all his life.
even though he did not smoke in all his life.
Sentence: Although the effects does not happen over night, but one thing for sure, it causes serious harm to a persons health and in the lung run will suffer tremendously from the pain it may give you.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to persons and health
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 299 350
No. of Characters: 1431 1500
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.158 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.786 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.478 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.688 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.593 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5