Some children can learn more efficiently by watching Tv. Therefore, children should watch tv regularly both in school and at home. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that children can broaden their knowledge by watching tv. While I agree with the of watching TV could bring plenty of benefits for children, I do believe that they shouldn’t watch TV often inside and outside school.
On the one hand, there are variety of reasons why watching TV is beneficial in some ways. One reason is that children can draw inspiration and easily access a world of knowledge through some interesting television programs. For example, some educational TV shows namely “road to Olympia” or “who is the millionaire” can bring enormous information about different aspect of life, from science to culture. Furthermore, youngsters can not only enlarge their knowledge but also develop their soft skills through watching TV. They may learn how to organize a meeting or to gain confidence in a crowd.
One the other hand, watching tv frequently could have some drawbacks to children mentally and physically. Firstly, children who watching tv all the time could be gradually addicted to TV and this can carry health risks to them. There is a study which show that children who are addicted to watching TV, instead of playing outdoor games, are more prone to obesity. Secondly, with the expansion of media, some television programs are not right for the children but they can see it on TV easily. As a result, children could learn bad behavior and this can negatively affect the children in later life.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above,I accept that watching TV is beneficial for children to expand the world of knowledge but i believe everything is good in moderation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09665427509 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86062317766 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2912731514 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432002170947 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179871629775 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819889720756 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286559155775 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108353552775 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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