Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative
development
Currently, we live in an information technology age, so the phone has become an indispensable item for every person. There is an opinion that children nowadays often spend a lot of time on their phones to meet their learning and entertainment needs.
One of the reasons why kids focus on phones is because they like the conveniences that phones bring. There are many social networking applications and entertainment applications such as Facebook, and Tiktok that attract, catch the eyes, and make children attracted to those applications.
Another reason is the lack of family guidance and supervision. Their parents are so busy and so focused on their work that they often don't have the time to instruct and set limits and times for children to be able to use the phone.
I believe that young children spending too many hours on the phone is a negative development. First, too long exposure to the phone screen will cause eye diseases, fatigue, and nerve damage. Moreover, spending too much time on the phone makes children less exposed to the outside environment, which will cause limitations in life skills and communication skills.
In conclusion, entertaining social networking apps are the main reason why children spend a lot of time on their phones. This is a bad trend that needs to be tackled by families, and children need to be given extra-curricular activities to cut down on phone time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o focused on their work that they often dont have the time to instruct and set limit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01282051282 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90798385108 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4042954508 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16086460976 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650370310356 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543942916826 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878798838564 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365716318362 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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